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为什么在我们眼里学校生活是枯燥的？
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学生们谈起假日活动便眉飞色舞，说到回校上课就有点愁眉苦脸。为什么学生们不喜欢学校呢？因为学校生活太枯燥。请你写一篇文章，分析一下其中的原因。是因为学生们不喜欢上东耐钢看然三入站丝读章课呢，还是什么别的原因？
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WhyScho自品江尽杨展和olIsDullinOurEyes
Wheneverwetalkaboutholidays,thereisalwaysaprettysmile模就程控并议伟onourfaces.Butwhenwer来自ealizeourholidayswillsoon360问答beoverand冷呼父算营杨wehavetoreturntoschool,wefeelabitsad.Thisisnotbecausewehatestudy.Whatwehateisourdulllifeatschool.
Thescope①ofo征教初urschoollifeisnothingmorethanourschool,oreventhemuchsmallerclassroom.Everyday,everyter异况额低目m,wehaveourlessonsinthesamecl非红胡酸言连端矛停强assroomrepeatedly.Wehavenochancetogetintouchwithsocietytoenrichourlife.Schoolisjustlikeacagethatbinds②ourthoughtsandbeh已答aviors.How省物卷大canweteenagersstayinac画天age?Fortheteenagersitisjusttimet她月检方hatourownchar她充难可具复意actersareformed.One'scharactermustbemoul井下红原日谈般错北dedthroughpra缩从至往帮妒座考边亚cticeandexperiences.Buttheschoolpassesusknowledgemerelyfromtextbooks.Andnostudentcanfreehim烧居汽它尼失把挥岩约变selffromsomanykindsofhomework见直不附钱.Canweformourcharacterinthisway?No,never!
Wecannotmakefreeuseofourtime.Everydayweareforcedtodowhatwedon'tliketodo.Everydaywehavetostudyforbetterscores.Wejustdon'twanttobeslavesofscores.Sometimeswedonotevenhavetimetoreadnewspapers.OnceIheardthatoneofusdidnotevenknowwhoRonaldReagan③is.Butmostofourteachersatschoolthinkthatgoodscoresaremoreimportantthanstrongercharacters.Theyhighlypraisestudentswhoachievegoodscoresinsteadofpraisingthosewithstrongcharacters.
Allofushopethatlifeisbecomingricherandricher,andthescopeoflifemuchwider.Inschoolweshouldacquirenotonlyknowledge,butalsolearntounderstandnatureoflife.Ifschoollifeisfulloffunandinterests,Ibelievewewillenjoyschoollifemuchbetter.
【词语解释】
①scope[skup]n．范围；眼界
②bind[baind]v．捆；束缚
③RonaldReagan['r&nld'reign]罗纳德・里根（美国总统名）
【写法指要】
本文作者在引言段为自己立论“Whatwehateisourdulllifeatschool.”。接着，作者在正文中运用因果辩证关系对这一论点进行了直接论证。如果我们把“ourdulllifeatschool”看作结果的话，那么本文就是由结果推断原因了。作者根据自身的体验和学校存在的事实，分析出了两方面的原因：一是教学脱离实际、脱离社会，二是学校推行的是应试教育。最后，作者的结论是多姿多彩的学校生活才不会枯燥。
