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问题补充说明：I took our foreign teacher Mr.Brown,he came to Chana for the first time,to the Great Wall in last weekend.Having told about the history of the Great Wall,he was amazing at this world wonder.He was struck by the beautiful of the Great ***.So I took photo of him,which would be a good memory for ***.At the top,Mr.Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign his name.Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him.He decided to visit more places of interest when free.
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ItookourforeignteacherMr.Brown,(who)cametoC来自hinaforthefirsttime,totheGreatWall(去掉in)lastweekend.Havin唱课声g(加入been)toldaboutthehistoryoftheGreatWall,hewas(amazed)atthisworldwond厚候er.Hewasstruckbythe(beauty)oftheGreatWall.SoItook(加入a)photoofhim,whichwouldbeagoo密艺妒易景施居dmemoryforhim.Atthetop,Mr.Brownwas(so)interestedintheactivityofprotectingtheenvironmentthathewaseagertojoin(去掉in)andsignhisname.BoththeGreatWall(and)theChinesepeople(deeply)impressedhim.Hedecidedtovisitmoreplacesofinterestwhenfree.
